shadowhuntress13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snail]

Theres' the episode of Spongebog you'll ever see. I like where you're going with this.
The lines for the stomach go through the slime. My suggestion is to suggest the stomach through shading rather than the lines. I would also recommend a background.

Mabelma responds:

Alright on it, thanks fo leave a comment. I would love to add a background but personally I don't feel competent enough to add one without fucking up the whole image, but I thank you for your comment and I assure you that if some day I get good enough at background I'll go back and add one to this piece.

[Page Five]

A very compelling story. I didn't have to read your first 4 to figure out where I am. Nice composition.

Billosopher responds:

All credit to the Protomen. Thanks.

[no pun intended]

I don't get it. It's just a repeated pattern. Maybe if you added variation of color or added more to the pattern it could be better.

CNegative responds:

hmmmmm, mabe. thanks huntress.